Hi my name is CJ. I go to Te Hapara. I like rugby.
I am good at rugby and soccer. I enjoy playing rugby because it is fun and you get to tackle people.
I sometimes find school work hard.
Tuesday 12 June 2018
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i helped :D
ReplyDeleteCJ you need to be a bit more enthusiastic about your writing. Apart from that it's ok!
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the part when you said what you like. Did you think about adding detail?. When did you start playing rugby
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I am Cheryl from Riverdale School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you are keen on sport because sports are a healthy thing to do.
I learnt that you like tackle rugby. I like watching the All Blacks. They are good at tackling.
Maybe you could tell us a bit about your family. How many siblings have you got?
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog https://cheryllearner.blogspot.com/
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Cheryl
Kia ora, I am Myles from Riverdale School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you play rugby. I play rugby too and i like tackling people.
I learnt that that you find school work hard. I find school work hard.
Maybe you could tell us what school work you like doing. I like doing maths
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://riverdalegismylesg.blogspot.com/
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Myles
kia ora cj I like that you like playing rugby because people like watching you play
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Kia ora ,Cj My name is Hosanna from mangapapa school and I like your piece of writing it is fun tackling people.But maybe you should of add more writing
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